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The incident occurred at approximately ten fifteen. The time was estimated by the witness, not taken from the camera. The camera clock was later found to be three minutes fast. Please keep both sources identified in the report and ask the technical team to confirm the corrected recording time before updating the sequence.

The aim is to produce a sequence that another reader can follow without assuming that every time is equally reliable. A witness may remember the order of events accurately while being uncertain about the exact minute. A recording can provide useful detail, but a clock error must be understood before its times are compared with another source. Neither source should be discarded simply because the first comparison reveals a difference. In the draft, one sentence says that a person deliberately ignored an instruction. The available notes describe what the person did, but they do not establish the person's intention. Please revise the sentence to separate the observed action from any interpretation. If an interpretation is relevant, identify who made it and what evidence supports it. The technical team will provide a short note explaining how the recording time was checked. Keep that note with the report so that a later reviewer can understand why the sequence changed. A clear correction with a traceable reason is more useful than silently replacing the earlier account.